Unrecognizable: Chapter 1
A follow-up story to "Treason" that takes place after my two short stories featuring 4435. I highly encourage you to read that and watch The Full Bucketniers before reading this.
Summary (because this one will take a while to fully write due to midterms, sailing, and life): It's been years since Sarah mysteriously left the Full Bucketniers. Nevertheless, when trouble erupts during a snowstorm, she is the only one who can help. Can she do it while trying to conceal what has happened to her, and what exactly is causing all this trouble? Surely it can't be just a little snow...
Tempting Fate
Sarah was nervous. No, that wasn't the right word.
Jason had started pulling the Bucketliner Daylight by himself without notice in the summer of 1955. She had told him not to inform any of her friends about her fate. Management had then tapped her for one last run on the Coast Daylight and then torn the streamlining off and painted black over her beautiful red and orange.
This wasn't ordinary fear. It was the fear of the embarrassment and shame that would inevitably come when her old friends saw her so drastically and horribly altered from when they had last met. She didn't want their sympathy. She just wanted to be herself, the pretty, kind, and famously loyal GS-4 that the last decade had defined her as. But technology was the one opponent she could not stand up to.
The passing scenery was becoming achingly familiar, from the special shade that the desert sand turned when it mixed with snow to the pattern of gusts of icy air. Sarah found her apprehension slightly mitigated by the prospect of seeing her brother and his friends again, especially since she was going to be able to spend Christmas with them.
The Fort Fairfax yard was bigger than she remembered. There was at least one more yard track, and they seemed to have lengthened the turnouts to permit faster entrances. She looked around for any of the Full Bucketniers and Mr. Iverson's business car, but her search was in vain. Only a few strings of freight cars populated the yard, far fewer than it could hold. Sarah sighed. Even here, the traffic declines were paramount despite the infamously traffic-heavy holiday rush.
She uncoupled from her train and backed into the empty servicing area. Her crew climbed down, grumbling about why they couldn't have a diesel with a cab that wasn't medieval to the point of being exposed to the open air before trudging through the cold wind and drifting snow towards the crew lounge. Sarah hissed at the indignity of the insult, but they didn't hear the noise over the wind. Since they'd been kind enough to adjust her fire to her preferences, she decided it was best not to repeat the rude gesture.
"Well," she said to herself with a yawn, "I might as well get some sleep while I wait for the others."
She didn't know how long she'd been sleeping, but when she awoke the snow was falling much faster. She could hardly see the warehouses at the other end of the yard. The rails were buried beneath the white substance, but not by much, if she was correctly seeing out how much of the freight cars' wheels remained exposed.
A few flakes landed on her headlight and she shuddered involuntarily. This wasn't the powdery kind, but the wet, heavy slush that really screwed things up because it would always melt and then freeze as ice. And there was no sign of any of the Full Bucketniers either. Sarah was starting to worry.
She suddenly saw a light from the crew lounge. Sarah inched herself forward. While her running gear was fine, it was stiff and would probably require oiling before she traveled any main line track, meaning the oil was solidifying. This wasn't a good omen. She stopped when she was in sight of the lounge. Her brakes made an embarrassing amount of noise, but fortunately it attracted the right kind of attention.
"Ah, she took the initiative to come to you!" Mr. Iverson strode from the interior of the office. "That's the Sarah I remember! Welcome back; I'm sorry we don't have the time for more pleasantries now."
"What's going on, sir? Where do you need me?"
"Well, this is rather unorthodox because you technically aren't an FBL engine and we didn't lease you from SP, but right now we don't have any other engines available to run a plow extra to clear the line. And this damnable snow is building up fast; it's been four hours, and we've already received more than three and a half inches. Of course, your consent comes first."
"If my friends' safety is on the line, I will. Count on it."
"Good. There are some mountainous areas here that can cause avalanches, so you'll have a rotary sandwiched between you and the plow. And we may need you to help unstick the others, so both the plow and rotary have heavy winches on them. Your crew knows how to use them. Oh, and they remember you from when you worked here, so you shouldn't have any difficulties."
"Alright, thank you, sir. I'll do my best to bring my friends home safe."
"That's a good engine," Mr. Iverson smiled encouragingly. "That cosmetic alteration didn't change who you are in the slightest, my dear."
Sarah blushed slightly as she backed onto the wye to couple onto the rotary and plow. "Aw, thanks, Mr. Iverson. I appreciate the compliment. Just don't tell the others I'm back yet, okay? I want to surprise them." She offered no assurances of how things would go, but as every seasoned engine and railroader knew, that would only be baiting bad luck.
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"Lewis, what's going on?" Hevy asked on behalf of his brothers as their train slowed.
"The signal ahead just went out. Boy, things are going south fast. I've never seen a storm this bad since 1949."
"What's the idea, anyway, sending us another oversized freight train the day before Christmas Eve? Nobody's going to be able to buy this stuff," Echo grumbled.
"How should I know? There's no figuring out the free market," Fives retorted.
"Guys, focus. I need you to be ready with your dynamic brakes since we're on a downhill. Besides, the worst of it will be over once we get through these next two tunnels. You can debate then."
"Oh come on, Lewis, it's just a snowstorm. What's the worst - "
"Shut up, Fives!" Hevy and Lewis shouted at the same time.
"What, you don't actually believe that old superstition?"
"I have my reasons. You need not know any."
"Fives, Lewis is far more experienced than we are. If he's concerned about it, that's reason enough for me."
As if on cue Lewis suddenly slammed on his brakes and the three GP7s instinctively mirrored him.
"Damn, the tunnel ahead is completely blocked!"
"Well, we could try reversing to build up speed and break through."
"That's probably - " the radio squawked. " - not going to happen now. The caboose just reported a sudden drop of air pressure to zero. Either that means the air hose is completely blocked, or the train got cut in half by an avalanche. You had to jinx it, Fives!"
"Moving on...shouldn't we try to see which one is the case?"
"What good will it do us now? If the brakes are stuck, we're stuck, and if we're derailed, we won't be able to back up since there aren't any crossovers."
"Alright, alright, I'm a believer!" Echo groaned. Fives wisely stayed silent.
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Sarah eyed the small waves of snow flying off the plow's edge with worry. Though Daniel and Larry had both passed through the area before her, the rails were already almost completely buried.
She came to a red signal. A few moments later Jason emerged from the chokingly thick snowfall with the Bucketliner. "Hey, take care over the bridge a few miles down the line. It's making noises a bridge definitely should not make. It might collapse under the weight of all the snow on it." His message delivered, the PA belched a little smoke and accelerated towards Fort Fairfax.
Sarah uttered a hasty "thank you" as he passed. There was no point in assuring him of her caution; that would just ensure disaster. The signal turned green and Sarah proceeded, a new worry burdening her thoughts.
"He didn't recognize me either. I mean, the snow's making visibility terrible, I could hardly see Daniel, and I passed Larry at speed. But Jason made a point of slowing down to deliver his message, and I spoke to him. A-Am I really that different from who I was?"
A few minutes later, they approached the Fairfax River bridge. Just as Jason had warned, snow was piled to almost three feet high on either side of the tracks, and with each gust of wind the structure creaked and groaned ominously. As Sarah approached it shrieked in a strong gust, causing everyone to jump.
Fortunately her crew knew what to do. Without dropping their speed, they extended the plow and rotary's wings. The stubby extensions brushed a decent amount of the wet snow off the bridge and onto the ice below, but the bridge still groaned as more of the short train's weight was put on it.
Sarah herself was now on the bridge and the structure's groans became even more pronounced. While most of the excess snow had been brushed off, it had already been overstressed, and now it was only a matter of time now before the fatigued metal gave way. Now her tender had joined the rest of the train on the bridge, which gave its loudest groan yet and lurched violently as another strong gust rocked it.
Sarah closed her eyes and focused her thoughts on moving forward. Left, right, left, right. "Don't think about it."
The plow made it. So too did the rotary. But just as the engine and crew collectively exhaled a sigh of relief, the sound of their worst nightmares rent the air as the bridge entered its death throes.
A follow-up story to "Treason" that takes place after my two short stories featuring 4435. I highly encourage you to read that and watch The Full Bucketniers before reading this.
Summary (because this one will take a while to fully write due to midterms, sailing, and life): It's been years since Sarah mysteriously left the Full Bucketniers. Nevertheless, when trouble erupts during a snowstorm, she is the only one who can help. Can she do it while trying to conceal what has happened to her, and what exactly is causing all this trouble? Surely it can't be just a little snow...
Unrecognizable: A Full Bucketniers Fan Fiction
Tempting Fate
Sarah was nervous. No, that wasn't the right word.
Jason had started pulling the Bucketliner Daylight by himself without notice in the summer of 1955. She had told him not to inform any of her friends about her fate. Management had then tapped her for one last run on the Coast Daylight and then torn the streamlining off and painted black over her beautiful red and orange.
This wasn't ordinary fear. It was the fear of the embarrassment and shame that would inevitably come when her old friends saw her so drastically and horribly altered from when they had last met. She didn't want their sympathy. She just wanted to be herself, the pretty, kind, and famously loyal GS-4 that the last decade had defined her as. But technology was the one opponent she could not stand up to.
The passing scenery was becoming achingly familiar, from the special shade that the desert sand turned when it mixed with snow to the pattern of gusts of icy air. Sarah found her apprehension slightly mitigated by the prospect of seeing her brother and his friends again, especially since she was going to be able to spend Christmas with them.
The Fort Fairfax yard was bigger than she remembered. There was at least one more yard track, and they seemed to have lengthened the turnouts to permit faster entrances. She looked around for any of the Full Bucketniers and Mr. Iverson's business car, but her search was in vain. Only a few strings of freight cars populated the yard, far fewer than it could hold. Sarah sighed. Even here, the traffic declines were paramount despite the infamously traffic-heavy holiday rush.
She uncoupled from her train and backed into the empty servicing area. Her crew climbed down, grumbling about why they couldn't have a diesel with a cab that wasn't medieval to the point of being exposed to the open air before trudging through the cold wind and drifting snow towards the crew lounge. Sarah hissed at the indignity of the insult, but they didn't hear the noise over the wind. Since they'd been kind enough to adjust her fire to her preferences, she decided it was best not to repeat the rude gesture.
"Well," she said to herself with a yawn, "I might as well get some sleep while I wait for the others."
She didn't know how long she'd been sleeping, but when she awoke the snow was falling much faster. She could hardly see the warehouses at the other end of the yard. The rails were buried beneath the white substance, but not by much, if she was correctly seeing out how much of the freight cars' wheels remained exposed.
A few flakes landed on her headlight and she shuddered involuntarily. This wasn't the powdery kind, but the wet, heavy slush that really screwed things up because it would always melt and then freeze as ice. And there was no sign of any of the Full Bucketniers either. Sarah was starting to worry.
She suddenly saw a light from the crew lounge. Sarah inched herself forward. While her running gear was fine, it was stiff and would probably require oiling before she traveled any main line track, meaning the oil was solidifying. This wasn't a good omen. She stopped when she was in sight of the lounge. Her brakes made an embarrassing amount of noise, but fortunately it attracted the right kind of attention.
"Ah, she took the initiative to come to you!" Mr. Iverson strode from the interior of the office. "That's the Sarah I remember! Welcome back; I'm sorry we don't have the time for more pleasantries now."
"What's going on, sir? Where do you need me?"
"Well, this is rather unorthodox because you technically aren't an FBL engine and we didn't lease you from SP, but right now we don't have any other engines available to run a plow extra to clear the line. And this damnable snow is building up fast; it's been four hours, and we've already received more than three and a half inches. Of course, your consent comes first."
"If my friends' safety is on the line, I will. Count on it."
"Good. There are some mountainous areas here that can cause avalanches, so you'll have a rotary sandwiched between you and the plow. And we may need you to help unstick the others, so both the plow and rotary have heavy winches on them. Your crew knows how to use them. Oh, and they remember you from when you worked here, so you shouldn't have any difficulties."
"Alright, thank you, sir. I'll do my best to bring my friends home safe."
"That's a good engine," Mr. Iverson smiled encouragingly. "That cosmetic alteration didn't change who you are in the slightest, my dear."
Sarah blushed slightly as she backed onto the wye to couple onto the rotary and plow. "Aw, thanks, Mr. Iverson. I appreciate the compliment. Just don't tell the others I'm back yet, okay? I want to surprise them." She offered no assurances of how things would go, but as every seasoned engine and railroader knew, that would only be baiting bad luck.
------------ ---------- ------------ ----------
"Lewis, what's going on?" Hevy asked on behalf of his brothers as their train slowed.
"The signal ahead just went out. Boy, things are going south fast. I've never seen a storm this bad since 1949."
"What's the idea, anyway, sending us another oversized freight train the day before Christmas Eve? Nobody's going to be able to buy this stuff," Echo grumbled.
"How should I know? There's no figuring out the free market," Fives retorted.
"Guys, focus. I need you to be ready with your dynamic brakes since we're on a downhill. Besides, the worst of it will be over once we get through these next two tunnels. You can debate then."
"Oh come on, Lewis, it's just a snowstorm. What's the worst - "
"Shut up, Fives!" Hevy and Lewis shouted at the same time.
"What, you don't actually believe that old superstition?"
"I have my reasons. You need not know any."
"Fives, Lewis is far more experienced than we are. If he's concerned about it, that's reason enough for me."
As if on cue Lewis suddenly slammed on his brakes and the three GP7s instinctively mirrored him.
"Damn, the tunnel ahead is completely blocked!"
"Well, we could try reversing to build up speed and break through."
"That's probably - " the radio squawked. " - not going to happen now. The caboose just reported a sudden drop of air pressure to zero. Either that means the air hose is completely blocked, or the train got cut in half by an avalanche. You had to jinx it, Fives!"
"Moving on...shouldn't we try to see which one is the case?"
"What good will it do us now? If the brakes are stuck, we're stuck, and if we're derailed, we won't be able to back up since there aren't any crossovers."
"Alright, alright, I'm a believer!" Echo groaned. Fives wisely stayed silent.
------------ ---------- ------------ ----------
Sarah eyed the small waves of snow flying off the plow's edge with worry. Though Daniel and Larry had both passed through the area before her, the rails were already almost completely buried.
She came to a red signal. A few moments later Jason emerged from the chokingly thick snowfall with the Bucketliner. "Hey, take care over the bridge a few miles down the line. It's making noises a bridge definitely should not make. It might collapse under the weight of all the snow on it." His message delivered, the PA belched a little smoke and accelerated towards Fort Fairfax.
Sarah uttered a hasty "thank you" as he passed. There was no point in assuring him of her caution; that would just ensure disaster. The signal turned green and Sarah proceeded, a new worry burdening her thoughts.
"He didn't recognize me either. I mean, the snow's making visibility terrible, I could hardly see Daniel, and I passed Larry at speed. But Jason made a point of slowing down to deliver his message, and I spoke to him. A-Am I really that different from who I was?"
A few minutes later, they approached the Fairfax River bridge. Just as Jason had warned, snow was piled to almost three feet high on either side of the tracks, and with each gust of wind the structure creaked and groaned ominously. As Sarah approached it shrieked in a strong gust, causing everyone to jump.
Fortunately her crew knew what to do. Without dropping their speed, they extended the plow and rotary's wings. The stubby extensions brushed a decent amount of the wet snow off the bridge and onto the ice below, but the bridge still groaned as more of the short train's weight was put on it.
Sarah herself was now on the bridge and the structure's groans became even more pronounced. While most of the excess snow had been brushed off, it had already been overstressed, and now it was only a matter of time now before the fatigued metal gave way. Now her tender had joined the rest of the train on the bridge, which gave its loudest groan yet and lurched violently as another strong gust rocked it.
Sarah closed her eyes and focused her thoughts on moving forward. Left, right, left, right. "Don't think about it."
The plow made it. So too did the rotary. But just as the engine and crew collectively exhaled a sigh of relief, the sound of their worst nightmares rent the air as the bridge entered its death throes.
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