I've noticed 56 people have downloaded my Strike Excursion Activity.

If you downloaded it, reply to this post and tell me what you think (no forcing).
I know I've made a mistake by using MRL Cabooses in this activity even though MRL didn't start until 1987, but oh well I probably won't mess that up again.

Other than the goof, what else did I do right or do wrong?

Also did you like the story I created?